【每日改写练习】2013.12.13
本帖最后由 乐乐 于 2013-12-13 16:16 编辑原句
camera case
Anyone with a camera needs to have a case. Though some cameras are very small, they still could use some protection. The camera that I have is very awkward in shape, but I wouldn't exchange it for any other type.
乐乐改 改写分析工具结果
1. 简易改写版（几乎不需要英语基础。。。）Anyone using a camera should have a case. Although some cameras are really small, they however should use some protection. The camera which I have is really embarrassing in shape, however I would not trade it for any other type.2. 中级改写版（结合乐乐改21改点以及口诀）
这个例子，包括以后的例子里，大家一定要记住：
定语从句一定要掌握好，改写里很重要，不管是否有乐乐改教程或者dofast教程，改写者一定要掌握。A case is needed by anyone who has a camera. Some protection could still be used for mall ones, though they are really very small. I have a camera whose shape is very awkward, but there’s no any other type of camera that I will exchange it for.3. 高级改写版（结合改写分析工具结果，自由发挥）Do you have a case for your camera? It’s highly recommended that every camera owner should have a case, even for those really small cameras. For me, I have an “ugly” camera but I like it so much that I won’t exchange it for any other cameras.通过copyscape检测
简易改写检测 通过
中级改写，高级改写检测 通过
勉強しました I've learnt a lot thx
简易改写版居然能通过, copyscape也太....
简易版过不了谷歌，单纯的替换关键词，谷歌能识别
{:14_1224:} 怎么不上QQ了啊
xiao9 发表于 2013-12-13 20:33 static/image/common/back.gif
怎么不上QQ了啊
猪蹄{:14_1226:}{:14_1226:}{:14_1226:}
掩面，俺需要回炉重新学习英语
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