【每日改写练习】2013.12.13

乐乐

原句

camera case

Anyone with a camera needs to have a case. Though some cameras are very small, they still could use some protection. The camera that I have is very awkward in shape, but I wouldn't exchange it for any other type.  

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1. 简易改写版（几乎不需要英语基础。。。）

1. Anyone using a camera should have a case. Although some cameras are really small, they however should use some protection. The camera which I have is really embarrassing in shape, however I would not trade it for any other type.

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2. 中级改写版（结合乐乐改21改点以及口诀）
这个例子，包括以后的例子里，大家一定要记住：
定语从句一定要掌握好，改写里很重要，不管是否有乐乐改教程或者dofast教程，改写者一定要掌握。

1. A case is needed by anyone who has a camera. Some protection could still be used for mall ones, though they are really very small. I have a camera whose shape is very awkward, but there’s no any other type of camera that I will exchange it for.

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3. 高级改写版（结合改写分析工具结果，自由发挥）

1. Do you have a case for your camera? It’s highly recommended that every camera owner should have a case, even for those really small cameras. For me, I have an “ugly” camera but I like it so much that I won’t exchange it for any other cameras.

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conviction5800

勉強しました I've learnt a lot thx

luguokankan

简易改写版居然能通过, copyscape也太....

fineday

简易版过不了谷歌，单纯的替换关键词，谷歌能识别

xiao9

怎么不上QQ了啊

xiao9

xiao9 发表于 2013-12-13 20:33

                               
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怎么不上QQ了啊

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大虫子

掩面，俺需要回炉重新学习英语